This year I began to study Architecture in Universidad de Chile, at the FAU. I have always wanted to study this career, at least since 4 years ago (in 1st year of secundary, when I started to think more seriously in my future). I decided to study Architecture because I have always been an drawer (amateur obviously, but with some skills); since I was a little boy that I liked to draw, and people said to me in many times "you should study Architecture, you are good on that", and things like that, but I really didn´t think it very seriously. Then, one day I saw on Tv a show called "City Tour", and it was about a man (Federico Sanchez, an Architect and Desinger) who walk around different places of the city, and speak about it´s architecture, and explain so many things that wasn´t at first view, and that made me start to analize a little more all around me, and find a hidden logic in everything. When I said that I wanted to be an Architect, my family was happy because they understand that is a nice career, "a big one" (maybe like Medicine, or Engineer) so they always supported my choice.
I thought about "how it could be" study this, and I didn´t imagine the things that I have made and learn on this month. I thought about make buildings, and draws of places, but there is something deeper in this way, what is learn to look again; watch everything in a new way, looking for the sense of all of the elements what make a total. I feel happy to be here, my classmates are good people, and we help each other when we have to do it. And that´s just the first month, so now I just think: to the infinite, and beyond!
I thought about "how it could be" study this, and I didn´t imagine the things that I have made and learn on this month. I thought about make buildings, and draws of places, but there is something deeper in this way, what is learn to look again; watch everything in a new way, looking for the sense of all of the elements what make a total. I feel happy to be here, my classmates are good people, and we help each other when we have to do it. And that´s just the first month, so now I just think: to the infinite, and beyond!
woah, i didn't know that you like draw. I like city tour because federico valdez it's a very cult man, and he its a very good designer. I didn't know he is an architect but i want to see his job. "Architorture" it's a good career but it's too exhaustive. Im pretty sure you be an good architect an a good drawer
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… I have always wanted to study this (career) , at least since 4 years ago (in 1st year of sec(u)Ondary, when
…I have always been a(n) drawer
…and 2) people said to me (in) 1)many times
… you are good (on) AT that", and things like that, but I really didn´t think OF it very seriously.
Architect and Desinger) who walkED around different places of the city, and (speak) SPOKE about it´s architecture, and explainED so many things that (wasn´t) WEREN’T CLEAR?
… at first (view,) SIGHT and that made me start to analYze 2)a little more 1)all around me,
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… (maybe like Medicine, or EngineerING) so they always supported my choice.
I thought about "how it could be" TO study this,
…I have made and learnED (on) this month.
I HAVE thought about making(e) buildings, and drawINGs of places
…THAT (what) is TO learn to look again; watch everything in a new way, looking for the sense of all of the elements T(w)hat make a total.